I don't mean to sound like a jerk or something, but this is probably your worst picture of Noodle I have seen, not saying that your a bad artist but I think your earlier pictures of Noodle are way better.
I do have to say that it is a bit different from the other drawings that Psychoon has done, Noodle in this case looks a little different to me compared to the pages of the comic: Her hair is mid to her eye instead of being able to completely cover the eye, Her cloths, well it looks like she is wearing 2D's "Sudden Impact Driving School" jacket, just does not normally match her clothing style, given from Psychoon, Her chin is a bit smoothed up, She looks a bit younger than she really is, yet her left hand may be a bit exaggerated in size for her age. The size seems to vary among all of their hands, And Murdoc, well, his teeth are dulled (thank goodness...)
BUT, ANY WAYS... It all looks fine and good to me.
Yeah, my art teacher, she actually introduced the GoRiLLaZ to the class and the reality just hit me like a barrel of bricks. To me, this reality really stinks. It is not the way it is supposed to be. The way that every one has the 2D and Noodle relationship is the way it should be, not always all about material, money, and, eh, you know. It really helps you to find the truth in things and people and to find people who really care about you and others and not always about all that other stuff.
True happiness, I figure, is doing some thing that you find fun and having a girl friend that likes to do the same things that you find fun and loves you for who you are and not for what you have nor have to offer material wise.
It is some thing that I figured out that would make me happier than ever in my whole life, no quote from any one else but me.
Have you ever seen the movie Citizen Kane? (If you have not, watch it and really think about it and may be try to compare it to todays society and/or the really rich people that are always getting married and then in less than a month getting divorced.)
Again, I don't mean to come off as a jerk and the comic is one of the best fanfics I have ever seen. In fact, most of the pictures actually remind me of some of the story board pictures that Jaime himself has drawn. I just wanted to share my opinion.
Its the way the eyes are drawn, which already kinda bugs me enough as Noodles eyes are usually covered by her bangs, but it just doesn't look grity enough to me, it looked too cartoony, I know that sounds weird but thats my opinion.
Her eyes were closed, the open eyes didn't have as much detail, and the reason why I said this is because Psy's older pictures looked like something Jaime himself would have approved. Besides I talked with Psy and she gets where I am coming from.